A Letter in Pink

Orchid Pink.

Rounding the corner, all Iย could think about was getting home to a glass of wine and a hot shower. I was reaching for my phone to check the time, when my foot landed on something hard and my ankle rolled out. Down I went in an ungraceful collapse, my phone skittering away and my hands going out to break my fall. As I gathered up my phone and my bag (and my dignity), I looked around to see what I’d stepped on. It was a large package, torn and dirty, with some pink glitter showing though.

I picked it up and noticed the address was nearby. It was addressed to Max, but the surname was smudged. I was intrigued and I had to see what was inside. I carefully lifted the torn edges and was surprised to see that it was a giant, pink, glittery letter J.ย 

Off I went, limping slightly on my twisted ankle. I arrived at a small neat row house with a lovely cobalt blue door. I caught movement to my left and noticed a little blonde girl, all dressed in pink, at one of the windows. She looked quite glum. She soon noticed me and the package I was carrying. A few seconds passed as she studied me and then she began to giggle and point at me, then pointed inside the room, shouting “Daddy, daddy”.

I moved closer to her window and started to laugh. There high up on the bedroom wall were the sister letters, U-L-I-A.


Today’s Writing101 prompt: You stumble upon a random letter on the path. You read it. It affects you deeply, and you wish it could be returned to the person to which itโ€™s addressed. Write a story about this encounter.

A shoutout to my dearest friend Moana, who celebrates her birthday today. I told her about this prompt at her birthday drinks tonight and she suggested using an actual letter of the alphabet, rather than a document. I thought it was a brilliant idea.

Ok, so I confess that a giant pink letter J probably wouldn’t “affect me deeply” (although you know I love pink) but let’s say it does, for the story’s sake. The second part of the prompt was to be brief – write a short story. I had started to write a different story but it was becoming quite long so I came back to this idea. I hope you like it.

x desleyjane


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31 responses to “A Letter in Pink”

  1. Amy Sampson Avatar

    I love how you, literally, found a random letter. “J”! Brilliant. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      LOL thanks Amy. I must really thank Moana for the initial idea ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. Nancy Beach Avatar

    Creative! Love it!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks Nancy!

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  3. Joanne Avatar

    Very clever, such a lovely story!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much Joanne.

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  4. HumaAq Avatar

    A liked the humor in your blog.. Interstate!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much!

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  5. HumaAq Avatar

    Damn auto correct. I meant Interesting lol

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Heheh ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. ansumani Avatar

    Sweet Twist at the end there! Nice!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thank you so much!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks Russell ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. tildy1 Avatar

    Very creative. It sounds like the start of a love story to me! You could expand it someday when you have the time.

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thank you Tildy. I was having a similar thought. ๐Ÿ˜„

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  8. "Bethie" Avatar

    I liked this story very much! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Oh thanks Bethie.

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  9. inidna Avatar

    Ha, how clever! Very cute story ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much.

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  10. Andy Townend Avatar

    Ingenious, love it!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Hee Hee thanks so much!!

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  11. LifestyleswithLia Avatar
    LifestyleswithLia

    I love this!!! So creative and captivating !!! Great….I like how you put a twist on the letter from the prompt:)

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much Lia!!!

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  12. Enables Avatar

    Haha, very nice ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      LOL, thanks so much.

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  13. Stacy P. Fischer Avatar

    A talented photographer AND writer, Desley! Lovely, fun story ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Oh Stacy, thank you for such kind words ๐Ÿ™‚
      Hope you are doing well!!

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      1. Stacy P. Fischer Avatar

        You’re so welcome, Desley. As for me? Just trying to keep my head above water ๐Ÿ˜‰

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        1. desleyjane Avatar

          Ok….just keep swimming! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  14. Seeing | musings of a frequent flying scientist Avatar

    […] discussed the other assignments and when I told her the story of the random letter, we spent the next fifteen minutes extending the story into an epic take of love and betrayal, […]

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