Max vs Amelia

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“Max, you are driving me insane. I’ve already forgiven you for the coffee incident. I’m sorry I was upset but it was embarrassing. It was my first day! Youย wouldn’t have been happy either!”

Max wasn’t so sure. Ameliaย had been livid, staring daggers at him in the coffee shop. He considered her now. In her uptight conservative navy suit, hair pulled back and that pink scarf thing, he really thought she needed to loosen up. “Whatever, Amelia. I know when someone is pissed at me. I just wish you’d get over it and weย could just move on.”

Ameliaย pulled at the hem of her jacket. She loved this suit, but somehow it seemed to irritate her today. She remembered wearing it on the day she’d met Max actually, although she didn’t realise that he would be working withย her when he’d caused her to spill scalding coffee all over herself. She desperately wanted to fit in here in this new office, and she’d worked hard to do so. Most of the team members had come around and she felt comfortable with them, but Max! Max was becoming sullen and confrontational. She really should talk to him about it but he frustrated her so much that she always ended up shrieking at him. She had never experienced this problem before with someone at work.

She took a deep breath and shook her head. “Max, let’s forget it for now at least, and talk about the brief. Do you have the draft ready?”

“I do, but you aren’t going to like it.” He was smirking at her now, his eyebrow raised, which annoyed her.ย 

“Oh good grief, what now? It’s not enough for you to still be dragging outย something that happened a month ago, but now you’re deliberately working against me?ย Bad form Max. What’s going on?”

He stood up, threw the folder on her desk and leaned in so that their faces were bare inches apart. “It was a joke Amelia, could you lighten up?”

He stalked out ofย her office, turning back at the last minute to see her opening the brief and biting her bottom lip, a strand of hair falling in front of her face. He really was falling for her. What was he going to do?


I’ve been toying with Max and Amelia’s story for a while, and recently wrote what I think would be the opening as well as the coffee shop scene mentioned above. But I’m not sure how well this fits with today’s Writing101 prompt:ย Write a post based on the contrast between two things โ€” whether people, objects, emotions, places, or something else. For a twist, write it as dialogue.

As always, I’m very happy to hear your thoughts ๐Ÿ™‚

x desleyjane


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11 responses to “Max vs Amelia”

  1. graydaysandcoffee Avatar
    graydaysandcoffee

    love the tension between them!

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much!

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  2. luciledegodoy Avatar

    Clap, clap, clap. Love it DJ! This is building into a very exciting love story. Please bring more.
    Well written! Now lets have a glass of wine.
    xxx

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Cheers!
      Thank so much hun x.

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  3. brittabottle Avatar

    Love this! Was NOT expecting that twist at the end. I agree with Lucile…more please! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Aw thanks Britta. I have a rough beginning done, I’m working on it in my spare time! X

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      1. brittabottle Avatar

        Good luck! I’m looking forward to reading more in the future. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Enables Avatar

    Great plot, great post ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      Thanks so much!

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  5. A.B Mood Avatar

    I’m getting a feeling I’m going to LOVE their love story! โค Can't wait to hear the sequels ๐Ÿ˜‰
    By the way, office romances are my favorite ^_^ (if you've seen The Office you'd know why) ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. desleyjane Avatar

      LOL yes my fave too!!

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